Date: 2010-06-24 04:03 pm (UTC)
As you know, I adore these! They read like super satisfying slices of life.

You have such an amazing talent for capturing the small moments that happen in real life and transferring them to the page (screen?) flawlessly.

I loved this:
"Gavin bobbed happily in the front pack"

and this
"Jesse offered him a fistful of Cheerios, then dropped them on the floor as Zach tickled his stomach."

oh and don't forget this:
“Oh, man!” said Jesse, taking another massive bite of spaghetti taco. “These are awesome!”
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