I love all of these. The whole series of them. I just clutch them like precious things and reread them alot! because they make me smile and they are fantastic. But this line, Zach lifted his head from Chris’s taut stomach to meet his eyes. “Don’t make me turn this car around.” well it makes me just die. I think I love it most of all.
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Date: 2010-06-03 04:10 am (UTC)Zach lifted his head from Chris’s taut stomach to meet his eyes. “Don’t make me turn this car around.”
well it makes me just die. I think I love it most of all.
So in short, excellent job!