http://halfbreedchild.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] halfbreedchild.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] therumjournals 2011-01-03 03:34 am (UTC)

Oh good grief this was excellent.
Seriously, I needed this reminder. OH PINTO DONT EVER LEAVE ME!!!

“I love fucking you.”

Chris leaned over to steal a cool hazelnut kiss from Zach’s lips. “I love fucking you, too.”


What. Ever.
THAT SHOULD HAVE BEEN "I FUCKING LOVE YOU"!!!!!

And this was my favorite part you have ever written EVER:


Zach walked over and stood behind him, resting his chin on Chris’s shoulder. He slid his hands down Chris’s arms, all the way to his wrists so he could take Chris’s hands in his. He squeezed Chris’s fingers around the coffee scoop and dipped it into the can of coffee grounds.

“Um, Zach?”

“I’m helping!” Zach said, scooping up a spoonful of coffee. Chris tensed his arm muscles, fighting for control, and the scoop of coffee sprayed up into the air and fell across the counter....


This entire section. I don't know. I think it's the image of them standing that way - and it's such a childish thing to do (stop hitting yourself! stop hitting yourself!), but goes so much deeper. There is some real kink happening here and I love it.
Guh.
It was amazing.


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