This was great! I loved so much about it but it managed to combine so many intense emotions, the love, the desire, the embarassment and coyness. Adorable and hot.

I had to make him stop talking. I covered his mouth with mine and reached down to tug the ice-skating penguin pajama pants over his hips. This kind of summarises your fic, and the relationship between these two.

I also loved your first person voice, fantastic. Thank you for writing this!