This was perfect. Perfectly awesome characterizations. Philly was just as awesome in writing as it is to live in and around. YOU MADE A JOKE ABOUT A HIPSTER FROM THE MAIN LINE (which killed me dead considering I was in Honors with a girl just like that).
It is hilarious how much I'm like Chris Pine in this. I angst and agonize and I'm still a mostly unemployed (unless you count professional tutoring) gal with a B.A. in English.
The dialogue in this story is like magic. Sweet, buttery magic.
I can't think of a think that I don't love in this story. I'm not going to both copying and pasting any more lines because I'd end up reposting your fanfic which would get me no where (because I'd have to reread it AGAIN and its already 3AM and I totally need sleep).
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It is hilarious how much I'm like Chris Pine in this. I angst and agonize and I'm still a mostly unemployed (unless you count professional tutoring) gal with a B.A. in English.
The dialogue in this story is like magic. Sweet, buttery magic.
I can't think of a think that I don't love in this story. I'm not going to both copying and pasting any more lines because I'd end up reposting your fanfic which would get me no where (because I'd have to reread it AGAIN and its already 3AM and I totally need sleep).