I genuinely really enjoyed both stories, and often as I read, things pop into my head, but because of the dialogue only nature of this story, there's so much left unsaid, that there's a lot more stuff than usual popping up. Also, I do a lot of beta-reading for people and go into a lot of detail, so my mind's in that groove already!

Feel free to contact me to pick away. It would be wonderful to see a Christmas edition of this on the Kirk/McCoy advent calendar: http://community.livejournal.com/space_wrapped/

I'm thinking along the lines of what I said earlier about McCoy going on tour with them...a bit of angst, and then Christmas and fun and fluff and fabulous make-up sex. Or something... :-)

P.S. The K/Mc calendar is my mate, sangueuk's idea, so I'm promoting it for her wherever I can. :-)