WOW. I am super, super happy that this was posted all in one go, because I would have been a mess waiting for the next update; I've really enjoyed getting to work my way through it and really enjoy each chapter without that "HURRYREADNOW" pace that always seems to happen when a WIP has a new chapter uploaded.
I have never even been to Philly, ever, but reading this makes me want to go! I love that you worked in the culture, landmarks, and quirks of a city into your story-- it just amped up the vibrancy of the whole story. :) I loved your version of Zach and Chris, and the hodgepodge of supporting characters was really awesome.
All in all-- lots of fun all around, and a great read. Thanks for sharing!
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I have never even been to Philly, ever, but reading this makes me want to go! I love that you worked in the culture, landmarks, and quirks of a city into your story-- it just amped up the vibrancy of the whole story. :) I loved your version of Zach and Chris, and the hodgepodge of supporting characters was really awesome.
All in all-- lots of fun all around, and a great read. Thanks for sharing!